Today, I will compare and contrast "Camp Big Apple" and "Ranch West Camp." There are many things that I have to compare.
First of all, Big Apple is three weeks camp, but Ranch West Camp is four weeks camp.
Secondly, Big Apple Camp is only teaching English language tests like the SAT, but Ranch West Camp is teaching Math, Art, History, Science, Politics, World Cultures, Music, Computer Programming and Literature.
Thirdly, Big Apple Camp is three weeks intensive, but Ranch West Camp is four weeks camp in rural Canada. Also, Big Apple's other activities are usually tours of the city, trips to local museums and tickets to Broadway shows. For Ranch West Camp, the other activities are horseback riding, river rafting, hiking, canoeing and mountain biking.
I think Ranch West Camp is better for me and students because Big Apple Camp is just studying English SAT, but Ranch West Camp is studying Math, Art, History, Science, Politics, World Cultures, Music, Computer programming and Literature. That is better for me. It could be sad because Apple Camp is only three weeks but Ranch West Camp has one more week, which means four weeks.
-Dorothy-
2011년 8월 23일 화요일
2011년 8월 21일 일요일
The Letter to Class 16.
Hello Guys!!!! I'm Dorothy, Dongyun Kim. How are you Guys doing? Are you pretty good?
I'm not happy that I'm leaving from GLPS. I miss you guys!!!!!(not boys) I want to be at GLPS on next year. I still miss our PA, TA and teachers. First, ur PA was Sieun-Lee, than it changed to Youngpyo-Jun. Second, our TA was Min-Seung Kim, than it changed to Dongjin-Choi. I like both for our PA, but I think our second TA is more better. Do you guys agree with that?
Did you guys liked Mr. Kluge, Mr. Michalak, Mr. Reardon? I like both of them. Mr. Kluge is our advisor, which mean he teach us Debate, Mr. Michalak teaches History and Mr. Reardon teaches us Writng. I like all of them. It helped me how to Debate, Hisory and Writing.
At the end of the day, I learned a lot from GLPS. I was little bit crying on Farewell Party because we watched a photo video about 20 minutes. And the music sound was sad. Farewell Party was fun. We ate pizza, french fries, bread and some more....
This is the end of my letter to you guys~~
I hope I will see you guys again next Summer!!!
Bye~
-Dorothy, Dongyun- ^.^
I'm not happy that I'm leaving from GLPS. I miss you guys!!!!!(not boys) I want to be at GLPS on next year. I still miss our PA, TA and teachers. First, ur PA was Sieun-Lee, than it changed to Youngpyo-Jun. Second, our TA was Min-Seung Kim, than it changed to Dongjin-Choi. I like both for our PA, but I think our second TA is more better. Do you guys agree with that?
Did you guys liked Mr. Kluge, Mr. Michalak, Mr. Reardon? I like both of them. Mr. Kluge is our advisor, which mean he teach us Debate, Mr. Michalak teaches History and Mr. Reardon teaches us Writng. I like all of them. It helped me how to Debate, Hisory and Writing.
At the end of the day, I learned a lot from GLPS. I was little bit crying on Farewell Party because we watched a photo video about 20 minutes. And the music sound was sad. Farewell Party was fun. We ate pizza, french fries, bread and some more....
This is the end of my letter to you guys~~
I hope I will see you guys again next Summer!!!
Bye~
-Dorothy, Dongyun- ^.^
2011년 8월 13일 토요일
Skill Post 2
The Stella Awards (Summarizing)
This story is about a woman named Stella. Stella was the most unecessary lawsuit gets Stella every year. Stella was always crazy every time.
One day, Stella went to McDonald and she bought her coffee. But that time, Stella spilled her coffee on herself. Stella was crazy still. That time, Stella got 3rd degree burns. It cost her $20,000 in medical expenses. They went to court for medical cost. Court rules for Stella. The court ruled in favor for Stela lieback and order McDonald's for pay about $2.9 million dollars.
At the end of the story, she won so much money for spilling coffee on herself.
2002 Stella Awards Winner ( Paraphrasing)
This story is about Stella's Awards Winner. Well, the two sisters were very distressed. they thought that their mother was actually dying, but at the end it was OK. She wasn't sick at all. At the end the sisters were very angry because the doctor did not tell the two sisters what was wrong with her and what was happening.
-Dorothy-
This story is about a woman named Stella. Stella was the most unecessary lawsuit gets Stella every year. Stella was always crazy every time.
One day, Stella went to McDonald and she bought her coffee. But that time, Stella spilled her coffee on herself. Stella was crazy still. That time, Stella got 3rd degree burns. It cost her $20,000 in medical expenses. They went to court for medical cost. Court rules for Stella. The court ruled in favor for Stela lieback and order McDonald's for pay about $2.9 million dollars.
At the end of the story, she won so much money for spilling coffee on herself.
2002 Stella Awards Winner ( Paraphrasing)
This story is about Stella's Awards Winner. Well, the two sisters were very distressed. they thought that their mother was actually dying, but at the end it was OK. She wasn't sick at all. At the end the sisters were very angry because the doctor did not tell the two sisters what was wrong with her and what was happening.
-Dorothy-
2011년 8월 12일 금요일
Writing-Story with the same sentences.
Once upon a time, there was an evil elf who tried to conquer all the people in the world. That time, the victims were scared of evil elf because an evil elf was tried to conquer all people in the world. If I was an evil elf, I would not be kill the victims. That is really poor to kill the people. So many people got killed from an evil elf. If I would kill, I wouldn't kill all people in the world.
When there was a fighting, I wouldn't kill. I don't know why the evil elf want to kill many people. I'm not happy about it. If I was a victim, I would be very scared by an evil elf.
At the end of the story, most every people were died because the evil elf used to kill with a sword and an arrow. Why the evil elf wants to kill many people? I don't want like that.
That won't be happen again. ^.^
-Dorothy-
When there was a fighting, I wouldn't kill. I don't know why the evil elf want to kill many people. I'm not happy about it. If I was a victim, I would be very scared by an evil elf.
At the end of the story, most every people were died because the evil elf used to kill with a sword and an arrow. Why the evil elf wants to kill many people? I don't want like that.
That won't be happen again. ^.^
-Dorothy-
Skill post 2, Shark, Bear Attacks, (Paraphrasing), (Summarizing)
(Shark Attacks, Paraphrasing)
This story was about the shark attacks. Now, I will tell you about the important paragraph. The important paragraph was 3rd paragraph, I think. It's talking about the lightning. About 180 people were stuck by the lightning every year. But I think that 11 people were got attacked by the sharks. That's pretty sad that most people (about 180) strucked by the lightning. That sounds poor. I don't want that. But at least, there is a lightning happens. Do you guys like the lightning? I don't!!!!
My opinion is that lightning will not happen again.
(Bear Attacks Summarizing)
This story is about the two animal attacks. But I chose the bear attacks. This passage was about the bears. Some of the people got attacked by a bear. The bear be more afraid of us and away by itself.
It's more likely that we will die oin a car crash. In Yellowstone National Park. It is in US. some people likely to drown attacked by a bear. The five people got killed by grizzly bears. If we are still worried, we have the several ways. If I worried about the attacking by the bear, I think we have some several ways to reduce it.
Well, I think that traveling in groups are the one way. I think that Bears are unlikely to attack groups. If I try to run away, bears are much more likely to attack.
My opinion is that bears are really scary. So many or some people got attacked by the bear. So I'm hoping that some or many people do not get attacked by the bear.
-Dorothy-
This story was about the shark attacks. Now, I will tell you about the important paragraph. The important paragraph was 3rd paragraph, I think. It's talking about the lightning. About 180 people were stuck by the lightning every year. But I think that 11 people were got attacked by the sharks. That's pretty sad that most people (about 180) strucked by the lightning. That sounds poor. I don't want that. But at least, there is a lightning happens. Do you guys like the lightning? I don't!!!!
My opinion is that lightning will not happen again.
(Bear Attacks Summarizing)
This story is about the two animal attacks. But I chose the bear attacks. This passage was about the bears. Some of the people got attacked by a bear. The bear be more afraid of us and away by itself.
It's more likely that we will die oin a car crash. In Yellowstone National Park. It is in US. some people likely to drown attacked by a bear. The five people got killed by grizzly bears. If we are still worried, we have the several ways. If I worried about the attacking by the bear, I think we have some several ways to reduce it.
Well, I think that traveling in groups are the one way. I think that Bears are unlikely to attack groups. If I try to run away, bears are much more likely to attack.
My opinion is that bears are really scary. So many or some people got attacked by the bear. So I'm hoping that some or many people do not get attacked by the bear.
-Dorothy-
2011년 8월 10일 수요일
Meet Me Halfway-Black Eyed Peas
Guys!!!
This is called "Meet Me Halfway" Black Eyed Peas.
I really like this song.
I hope you will enjoy my video!!!!
^.^
-Dorothy-
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